The words for this week are:
Icy
Pause
Train
A secret revealed in the heat of the moment
His icy look is like a dagger in my heart
I walk away far from his accusing stare
I pause and ponder as the train passes me by
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Reflecting over it..
Nothing crushes more than a secret given and rejected.
Rose
xo
this leaves one wanting to know more
Christy
How lovely! Great play of words, thank you.
reminds me of the scene from the movie "hud" with paul newman and patricia neal,, where he is saying good bye to her in the empty train station at night... very good... excellent movie too, if you haven't seen it.....
Nice word images - icy/heat and ponder/passes...
Oh, I like this a lot... it gives my brain a location and I can't help wondering about the exchange.
~S
Oh man... I want to know what that secret was!!!!
Icy looks are daggers in the heart
Nice work...open to interpretation...I thought in the end the train of thought passed him/her by...or "him" like a train moving away.
Very powerful start. I can only imagine what the secret may have been.
"A secret revealed in the heat of the moment" - Oooo tell me more!
Many possibilities here...it makes me wonder, and I like that!!
This definitely has me wanting to know more! There's a lot of emotion in this...thank you for sharing!
I agree with Herb. Powerful first line. Maybe some symbolism in the train passing by?
I'd really like to know what she said, and if he got on the train and left. What happened? Please tell us more!I mean this in a good way. It's quite a story. Evocative.
What was this secret exchanged and did he leave on the train? Very intriguing piece. I love that you made me think about what happened. Keep up the good work.
Have a nice night.
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