Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Unrequited



The words for this week are:

Forgotten
Hotel
Obscure


Chance meetings at the Hotel
Stirred feelings long buried and forgotten
Hoping, wishing, wanting
Holding on although requite seems obscure

12 whisper(s):

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I like the ending. To what is right rather than what you want. :)

Rose

xo

gautami tripathy said...

Hoping, wishing, wanting....

Nancy said...

Chance meetings....that sounds so dangerous and romantic.

paisley said...

and to those of you who have never had a tainted forbidden love affair... do... at the time it is well worth the lack of requite....

excellent post.

Fledgling Poet said...

The elusive search...and still left wanting.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Hoping, wishing, wanting. We can relate to that so well and who hasn't wished for a chance meeting.

Carlos said...

Very nice. I can relate.

Bone said...

I really liked this piece, Ther. Chance meetings, forgotten feelings, and holding on. All very much real life.

TC said...

This was so heartbreaking to me. Beautiful, but dang, those old memories kill you sometimes.

Michelle Johnson said...

I love your poem. Chance meetings... something new. The last line is my favorite. Keep up the good work.

Michelle Johnson

Nancy said...

Chance meetings....I like it.

Who is she/he meeting and what should they do....

writerwoman said...

Very romantic and filled to the brink with longing. Love that.