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Princesses Can Be Bullies Too
People think of bullies as someone who are bigger, older. Someone who can physically hurt another and uses that power to bully someone else...
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The prompt for this week: My Nights A few years back, I was in São Paulo, Brazil on assignment for a month. We have a few local colleagu...
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The words for this week are: Icy Pause Train A secret revealed in the heat of the moment His icy look is like a dagger in my heart I walk aw...
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The words for this week are: Picture Reflected Stop Picture Perfect. The cliché just popped into his mind when he saw her. The face of a w...
14 comments:
ohh...I like!
I like this, short but gripping.
Rose
xo
Very pretty. This poem has a lyrical quality to it that sings.
'that lingers in the air' is a haunting phrase and a nice ending!
Very nice.
~S
I can smell her too.
Mmmm.. what a vivid scene you paint with such spare language! I envision strangers passing on a busy street. Very nice.
I like this, I could picture the scene.
very visual... very pleasing... all accept the sickeningly sweet perfume!!!!
I like this, like a short scene in a movie.
This reminds me of walking down the street and smelling lots of different scents and trying to figure out which person is wearing what. Nice poem!
:)
I find myself wishing that he could find her again and see where that could lead them. Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
Michelle
A story told in poetry. I too got a waft of her scent!
Funny how a simple scent can so strongly affect the mind, and heart.
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